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Very nice. Like this one a lot.

Constructive crit: the third frame, don't think you need him kissing the girl, I think another shot of him doing something keerazy and daring and then straight to the pub would be more punchy.

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Very nice. Like this one a lot.

Constructive crit: the third frame, don't think you need him kissing the girl, I think another shot of him doing something keerazy and daring and then straight to the pub would be more punchy.

hmm true, maybe like climbing the tower to reach her. I think I was just afraid some people wouldn't get that there was a princess to be saved or something, but that actually would've made a better strip by implying it rather than showing it.

Ah well, that's what you get for not drawing a rough thumbnail beforehand! It's the holidays and I don't have lectures to idle away brainstorming comic ideas y'see...

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hmm true, maybe like climbing the tower to reach her. I think I was just afraid some people wouldn't get that there was a princess to be saved or something, but that actually would've made a better strip by implying it rather than showing it.

Ah well, that's what you get for not drawing a rough thumbnail beforehand! It's the holidays and I don't have lectures to idle away brainstorming comic ideas y'see...

Yeah climbing the tower would have worked well I think. Still, very much liking the series. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks Ste and Gwyn, that's a relief to hear I was having a hard time telling if the humour's gone down in the last few. I'm really having trouble figuring out a pattern, a lot of the more popular strips were ideas I considered rejecting as being too weak...

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I have to say also that this is a clear reason of why practice makes perfect. Really digging them. Is there a higher res image of Cogito Ergo Sum? Want to print it out and shove it on my wall.

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Like blow your brains out all over his bedroom. Anyway, your work is really great. I like it. remember me when your rich and famous, you talented git.

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happy to oblige. Can't wait until exams are over, this has succeeded in getting me interested in art again! Gotta improve my life drawing, anatomy, painting, get into digital art...

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Very cool. I suppose the thing your comics have - which I think separates the better ones from the good but not quite so impacting - is genuine pathos. (Number 15 has taken pride of place beneath my Top Gear calendar, by the way.)

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I'm enjoying it enormously, and am proud to say I use that wall paper image on my desktop!

Comparisons to Bill Waterson in the artwork stakes, to be sure - good comps though.

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